Major themes: Perhaps we can make a slight distinction between a theme and an insight into the process of accomplishment. Traditionally literary criticism speaks of themes, but the excellent points you mention under this section are really principles of accomplishment. As stated now, the reader might miss that significance which I know you have in mind. For example, Howard's sense of forgiveness not only gives Red another chance. It also brings out deeper aspiration and commitment from him which Red in turn passes on to Seabiscuit aiding his miraculous recovery.
Parallel of the Characters’ Struggle and Success, and that of Society -- the social identification with Seabiscuit and Red is a powerful sutble factor in their phenomenal achievements. Like home court advantage, the subconscious energy of the whole society supported them.
Individuality -- you list it under values. It is such an important theme -- the whole story can be seen as a triumph of individuality. Perhaps you could make it a separate section and elaborate it.
Predecessor events -- the former employer who seeks Red's help. It may be difficult for readers to swallow, but it is simple ill will and jealousy from one who formerly looked down on Red and refused to recognize his talent.
I am not sure what the list of key search terms refers to.
After you are finished revisions, i will ask someone else to proofread it. garry 16:47, 6 December 2007 (UTC)